Changeset 96323bd for chapter07/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

10/02/2022 01:49:39 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0

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1dcfd50

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111194c (diff), 6582ddc5 (diff)
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Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/arm64

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• chapter07/introduction.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>This chapter shows how to build the last missing bits of the temporary
-  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.  Now
+  system: the tools needed to build the various packages.  Now
   that all circular dependencies have been resolved, a <quote>chroot</quote>
   environment, completely isolated from the host operating system (except for
@@ -18 +18 @@
 
   <para>For proper operation of the isolated environment, some communication
-  with the running kernel must be established. This is done through the
-  so-called <emphasis>Virtual Kernel File Systems</emphasis>, which must be
-  mounted when entering the chroot environment. You may want to check
-  that they are mounted by issuing <command>findmnt</command>.</para>
+  with the running kernel must be established. This is done via the
+  so-called <emphasis>Virtual Kernel File Systems</emphasis>, which will be
+  mounted before entering the chroot environment. You may want to verify
+  that they are mounted by issuing the <command>findmnt</command> command.</para>
 
   <para>Until <xref linkend="ch-tools-chroot"/>, the commands must be
@@ -28 +28 @@
   are run as &root;, fortunately without access to the OS of the computer
   you built LFS on. Be careful anyway, as it is easy to destroy the whole
-  LFS system with badly formed commands.</para>
+  LFS system with bad commands.</para>
 
 </sect1>