Changeset a3d0817 for chapter09/network.xml

Timestamp:

06/12/2020 08:42:32 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

9e7475a

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96f04d7

Message:

Text updated for cross2 chapter 9

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11928 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter09/network.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter09/network.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
     <primary sortas="d-network">network</primary>
   <secondary>configuring</secondary></indexterm>
-<!--
-  <para>This section only applies if a network card is to be
-  configured.</para>
-
-  <para>If a network card will not be used, there is likely no need to create
-  any configuration files relating to network cards. If that is the case, you
-  will need to remove the <filename class="symlink">network</filename> symlinks
-  from all run-level directories (<filename
-  class="directory">/etc/rc.d/rc*.d</filename>) after the bootscripts are
-  installed in <xref linkend="ch-config-bootscripts"/>.</para>
--->
+
   <sect2>
     <title>Creating Network Interface Configuration Files</title>
@@ -38 +28 @@
     the filename be <emphasis>ifconfig</emphasis>.</para>
 
-    <note><para>If the procedure in the previous section was not used, Udev
+    <note><para>If the procedure in the previous section was not used, udev
     will assign network card interface names based on system physical
     characteristics such as enp2s1. If you are not sure what your interface
@@ -65 +55 @@
     <para>If the <envar>ONBOOT</envar> variable is set to <quote>yes</quote> the
     System V network script will bring up the Network Interface Card (NIC) during
-    booting of the system. If set to anything but <quote>yes</quote> the NIC
+    the system boot process. If set to anything but <quote>yes</quote> the NIC
     will be ignored by the network script and not be automatically brought up.
     The interface can be manually started or stopped with the