Changeset bc2136e for chapter06/coreutils.xml

Timestamp:

06/16/2005 04:47:40 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

Archaic <archaic@…>

Branches:

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Children:

2a88671

Parents:

9c80e02

Message:

Several minor grammatical fixes. Thanks to Randy and Steve.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6011 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter06/coreutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/coreutils.xml

@@ -52 +52 @@
 <screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The test suite of Coreutils makes several assumptions about the
-presence of files and users that are not valid this early in the LFS
-build. Therefore, additional items need to be set up before running
-the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if
+<para>The test suite of Coreutils makes several invalid assumptions about the
+presence of system users and groups. Therefore, additional items need to be set
+up before running the tests. Skip down to <quote>Install the package</quote> if
 not running the test suite.</para>
 
-<para>Create two dummy groups and a dummy user name:</para>
+<para>Create two dummy groups and a dummy user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "dummy1:x:1000:" &gt;&gt; /etc/group