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#1517 fixed Entering the Chroot env nitpick archaic@… randy@…
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A minor grammatical note:

"It is important that all the commands throughout the remainder of this chapter and the following chapters be run from within the chroot environment."

It is my opinion that s/be/are/ because in the situation above 'are' should be used as the plural present indicative to 'be'.

#1519 fixed Chapter 6 - Creating Directories archaic@… randy@…
Description

Here is the introduction as it exists now:

"It is time to create some structure in the LFS file system. Create a directory tree. Issuing the following commands will create a standard tree:"

The 2nd sentence could perhaps be combined with the next one yielding the following:

Create a standard directory tree by issuing the following commands:

#1520 fixed Chapter 6 - Creating Essential Symlinks nitpick archaic@… randy@…
Description

The introduction is this:

"Some programs hard-wire paths to programs which do not yet exist. In order to satisfy these programs, create a number of symbolic links which will be replaced by real files throughout the course of this chapter after the software has been installed."

Programs don't hard-wire paths, they have hard-wired paths coded into them. There is a difference.

Perhaps modifying the text above as shown below can be a bit more technically accurate:

Some programs use hard-wired paths to programs which do not yet exist.

(note the only difference being "use" and "hard-wired")

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