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#1517 | fixed | Entering the Chroot env nitpick | ||
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A minor grammatical note: "It is important that all the commands throughout the remainder of this chapter and the following chapters be run from within the chroot environment." It is my opinion that s/be/are/ because in the situation above 'are' should be used as the plural present indicative to 'be'. |
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#1519 | fixed | Chapter 6 - Creating Directories | ||
Description |
Here is the introduction as it exists now: "It is time to create some structure in the LFS file system. Create a directory tree. Issuing the following commands will create a standard tree:" The 2nd sentence could perhaps be combined with the next one yielding the following: Create a standard directory tree by issuing the following commands: |
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#1520 | fixed | Chapter 6 - Creating Essential Symlinks nitpick | ||
Description |
The introduction is this: "Some programs hard-wire paths to programs which do not yet exist. In order to satisfy these programs, create a number of symbolic links which will be replaced by real files throughout the course of this chapter after the software has been installed." Programs don't hard-wire paths, they have hard-wired paths coded into them. There is a difference. Perhaps modifying the text above as shown below can be a bit more technically accurate: Some programs use hard-wired paths to programs which do not yet exist. (note the only difference being "use" and "hard-wired") |