Opened 19 years ago
Closed 19 years ago
#1558 closed defect (fixed)
Section 7.4.2 nitpick
Reported by: | Owned by: | Matthew Burgess | |
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Priority: | lowest | Milestone: | |
Component: | Book | Version: | TESTING |
Severity: | trivial | Keywords: | |
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Description
Noted in the first paragraph of this section:
"the data which the built-in drivers registered with sysfs are available to userspace processes "
There's a mismatch in this sentence. "the data" is typically considered singular, but "are" is typically used as in a plural capacity. Suggest s/are/is/
Change History (7)
comment:1 by , 19 years ago
comment:2 by , 19 years ago
s/the perhaps? That certainly makes more sense to me, as 'data' is certainly plural in this context.
As for lfs-bootscripts, yes it should be captialized.
comment:3 by , 19 years ago
Actually, I believe now after reviewing my entry, I was simply wrong.
"The data" can be considered plural.
Your call on removing the "the".
comment:4 by , 19 years ago
Status: | new → assigned |
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comment:5 by , 19 years ago
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comment:6 by , 19 years ago
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comment:7 by , 19 years ago
Resolution: | → fixed |
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Also noted in this section (next to last paragraph):
"To solve this, the S05modules bootscript was added to the lfs-bootscripts package"
Most other references in the book (all other?) treat the lfs-bootscripts package as a proper noun, meaning it should be capitalized appropriately. (LFS-Bootscripts)