Opened 16 years ago
Closed 16 years ago
#2325 closed task (duplicate)
...or those ISOs not labels -nosrc or -min
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| Priority: | normal | Milestone: | 7.0 |
| Component: | Book | Version: | SVN |
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Description
Chapter 1.1 - How to Build and LFS System
2nd paragraph states: ...Unfortunately, development of the LiveCD has not progressed recently and it only contains older versions of the source packages and patches (for those ISOs not labels -nosrc or -min), and this book.
That sentence needs to be fixed. The portion in parentheses is not clear at all. It'll make sense to some people, but the typical reader will look at that and re-read it a number of time before giving up on trying to parse its meaning.
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comment:1 by , 16 years ago
comment:2 by , 16 years ago
Something along these lines then?
and it contains older versions of the source packages and patches (the ISO images not labeled -nosrc or -min), and this book.
comment:4 by , 16 years ago
| Resolution: | → duplicate |
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| Status: | new → closed |
Closing as duplicate of (part of) #2307.
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I think a simple s/labels/labelled/ makes it much clearer. Potentially also s/ISOs/versions/, though maybe an assumption that our audience knows what an ISO is isn't too unreasonable?