Opened 15 years ago

Closed 15 years ago

#2325 closed task (duplicate)

...or those ISOs not labels -nosrc or -min

Reported by: gerard@… Owned by: lfs-book@…
Priority: normal Milestone: 7.0
Component: Book Version: SVN
Severity: trivial Keywords:
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Description

Chapter 1.1 - How to Build and LFS System

2nd paragraph states: ...Unfortunately, development of the LiveCD has not progressed recently and it only contains older versions of the source packages and patches (for those ISOs not labels -nosrc or -min), and this book.

That sentence needs to be fixed. The portion in parentheses is not clear at all. It'll make sense to some people, but the typical reader will look at that and re-read it a number of time before giving up on trying to parse its meaning.

Change History (4)

comment:1 by Matthew Burgess, 15 years ago

I think a simple s/labels/labelled/ makes it much clearer. Potentially also s/ISOs/versions/, though maybe an assumption that our audience knows what an ISO is isn't too unreasonable?

comment:2 by gerard@…, 15 years ago

Something along these lines then?

and it contains older versions of the source packages and patches (the ISO images not labeled -nosrc or -min), and this book.

comment:3 by Matthew Burgess, 15 years ago

Milestone: 7.0
Severity: normaltrivial

Looks good to me, Gerard.

comment:4 by Matthew Burgess, 15 years ago

Resolution: duplicate
Status: newclosed

Closing as duplicate of (part of) #2307.

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