Changeset dcd8072 for kde/kde-intro.xml

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 12:38:36 AM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

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Children:

93d9010

Parents:

7df21b30

Message:

sourceforge and grammar

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2259 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• kde/kde-intro.xml (modified) (1 diff)

kde/kde-intro.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para><acronym>KDE</acronym> is a comprehensive desktop environment that builds on 
-<application>XFree86</application> and <application>Qt</application> to provide
+<application>X</application> Window System and <application>Qt</application> to provide
 a window manager and many user tools, including a browser, word processor, 
 spreadsheet, presentation package, games, and numerous other utilities. It 
 provides extensive capabilities for customization.</para>
 
-<para>We divide the <acronym>KDE</acronym> instructions into two parts. The first part, the
+<para>The <acronym>KDE</acronym> instructions are divided into two parts. The first part, the
 core packages, are needed for the rest of <acronym>KDE</acronym> to work. The second part
 presents additional packages which provide functionality in various areas
-(multimedia, graphics etc).</para> 
+(multimedia, graphics, etc.).</para> 
 
 <para>There are two alternatives for installing <acronym>KDE</acronym>. Option one, that