Changeset aa15d3e


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Timestamp:
05/29/2004 08:25:12 AM (17 years ago)
Author:
Igor Živković <igor@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, krejzi/svn, lazarus, nosym, perl-modules, qt5new, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, v5_1, xry111/git-date, xry111/git-date-for-trunk, xry111/git-date-test
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Parents:
bb0d842
Message:

applied Randy's grammar and spelling fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2232 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

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  • introduction/important/bootscripts.xml

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    1717<para>The blfs-bootscripts package will be used throughout the <acronym>BLFS</acronym>
    1818book for startup scripts.  Unlike <acronym>LFS</acronym>, each init script
    19 has a seperate install target in the blfs-bootscripts package.
     19has a separate install target in the blfs-bootscripts package.
    2020It is recomended you keep the package
    2121source directory around until completion of your
  • introduction/important/patches.xml

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    1414</itemizedlist>
    1515
    16 <para>In short, the book only includes patches that are either Required or
    17 Recommended. There is a <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches">Patches subproject</ulink>
    18 which hosts various patches (including the patches included in the books)
     16<para>In short, the book only includes patches that are either required or
     17recommended. There is a <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches">Patches subproject</ulink>
     18which hosts various patches (including the patches referenced in the books)
    1919to enable you to configure your <acronym>LFS</acronym> the way you like it.</para>
    2020
  • introduction/important/pkgmgt.xml

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    9999mentioned in <xref linkend="intro-important-beyond"/> need to be expanded to
    100100include <filename>/usr/pkg/foo</filename>. For more than a few packages,
    101 this scheme becomes unmanagable.</para>
     101this scheme becomes unmanageable.</para>
    102102
    103103</sect3>
     
    111111to expand the environment variables. Though the symlinks can be created by the user,
    112112to automate the creation, many package managers have been written on this approach.
    113 Few of the popular ones are Stow, Epkg, Graft, and Depot.</para>
     113A few of the popular ones are Stow, Epkg, Graft, and Depot.</para>
    114114
    115115<para>The installation needs to be faked, so that the package thinks that it is
    116 installed in <filename>/usr</filename> though in reality it is installed in
    117 <filename>/ust/pkg</filename> hierarchy. Installing in this manner is not usually a trivial
     116installed in <filename class="directory">/usr</filename> though in reality it is installed in
     117<filename class="directory">/usr/pkg</filename> hierarchy. Installing in this manner is not usually a trivial
    118118task. For example, consider that you are installing a package libfoo-1.1. The following
    119119instructions may not install the package properly:</para>
  • introduction/important/unpacking.xml

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    7575staring at the screen hoping to catch a particular error or warning. Log files
    7676are also useful for debugging and keeping records. The following command
    77 allows you to create a installation log. Replace &lt;command&gt; with the
     77allows you to create an installation log. Replace &lt;command&gt; with the
    7878command you intend to execute.</para>
    7979
     
    8181
    8282<para><parameter>2&gt;&amp;1</parameter> redirects error messages
    83 to the same location as normal output. The <command>tee</command> command
     83to the same location as standard output. The <command>tee</command> command
    8484allows viewing of the output while logging the results to a file. The parentheses
    8585around the command run the entire command in a subshell and finally the
  • introduction/welcome/askhelp.xml

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    2020<itemizedlist>
    2121<listitem><para>Is the hardware support compiled into the kernel or
    22 available as a module to the kernel.  If it is a module, is it configured
    23 properly in <filename>modules.conf</filename> and has it been loaded.  You
     22available as a module to the kernel?  If it is a module, is it configured
     23properly in <filename>modules.conf</filename> and has it been loaded?  You
    2424should use <command>lsmod</command> as root to see if it's loaded. Check the
    2525<filename>sys.log</filename> or run <command>modprobe &lt;driver&gt;
     
    2828
    2929<listitem><para>Are your permissions properly set, especially for
    30 devices. <acronym>LFS</acronym> uses groups to make these settings easier, but
     30devices? <acronym>LFS</acronym> uses groups to make these settings easier, but
    3131it also adds the step of adding users to groups to allow access. A simple
    3232<command>moduser -G audio &lt;user&gt;</command> may be all that's necessary
    3333for that user to have access to the sound system.  Any question that starts
    34 out with "It works as root, but not as ..." should review permissions
    35 thoroughly
    36 prior to asking.</para></listitem>
     34out with "It works as root, but not as ..." requires a thorough review
     35of permissions prior to asking.</para></listitem>
    3736
    3837<listitem><para><acronym>BLFS</acronym> liberally uses <filename>
     
    4039need to expand your environment variables for each package placed there (e.g.
    4140PATH=$PATH:/opt/kde/bin).  In some cases, the package will walk you
    42 through the changes, but some will not.  <xref linkend="intro-important-beyond"/>
    43 is available to help you check.</para></listitem>
     41through the changes, but some will not.  The section called "<ulink
     42url="beyond.html">Going Beyond BLFS</ulink>" is available to help you check.</para></listitem>
    4443</itemizedlist></sect2>
    4544
  • introduction/welcome/changelog.xml

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    1111
    1212<itemizedlist>
     13
     14<listitem><para>May 29th, 2004 [igor]: Applied fixes for various
     15grammar and spelling errors, suggested by Randy
     16McMurchy.</para></listitem>
    1317
    1418<listitem><para>May 29th, 2004 [igor]: Moved the samba maintainer
  • introduction/welcome/conventions.xml

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    4444Therefore, this whole section is generally typed as seen.</para></blockquote>
    4545
     46<para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para>
     47
     48<blockquote><para>This form of text is used to encapsulate text that is
     49not to be typed as seen or copy and pasted.</para></blockquote>
     50
    4651</sect1>
    47 
  • introduction/welcome/version.xml

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    44
    55<para>This is <acronym>BLFS</acronym>-BOOK version &version; dated &releasedate;.
    6 If this version is older than a month a newer version is probably already
     6If this version is older than a month, a newer version is probably already
    77available for download. Check one of the mirror sites below for updated
    88versions.</para>
  • preface/foreword.xml

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    2222
    2323<para>Thanks as ever go to everyone in the <acronym>LFS</acronym>/<acronym>BLFS</acronym>
    24 community especially those who have contributed instructions, written text,
     24community; especially those who have contributed instructions, written text,
    2525answered questions and generally shouted when things were wrong!</para>
    2626
  • preface/organization.xml

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    3636
    3737<sect2><title>Part VII - Content Serving</title>
    38 <para>In this part we deal with databases and web server software
    39 <!--(including php)-->.</para></sect2>
     38<para>In this part we deal with databases and web server software.</para></sect2>
    4039
    4140<sect2><title>Part VIII - X + Window Managers</title>
    4241<para>This part explains how to set up a basic
    43 <application>XFree86</application> installation along
     42X Window System installation along
    4443with some generic <application>X</application> libraries and Window managers.</para></sect2>
    4544
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