Opened 20 years ago
Closed 20 years ago
#1566 closed defect (fixed)
Section 7.11 nitpicks
Reported by: | Owned by: | Matthew Burgess | |
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Priority: | lowest | Milestone: | |
Component: | Book | Version: | TESTING |
Severity: | trivial | Keywords: | |
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Description
Multiple stuff here:
- Noted in the opening sentence:
"If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address"
I find it unusual to hyphenate IP-address. Even so much that in the very next paragraph it is not hypenated. Either way, it probably should be consistent.
- Noted in the 2nd paragraph:
"Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g., there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP addressesmost users do not have this),"
e.g. and i.e. are typically not interchangeable. e.g. (Latin meaning, exempli gratia - actual meaning, for example) i.e. (Latin meaning, id est - actual meaning, that is)
In the text above, i.e. should be used as the explanation is not an example, it is the actual meaning (translation) of "visible to the Internet"
- In the valid range of addresses table, since a *range* is being
specified, shouldn't the last octet of the address be the maximum allowed in the range (and the third octet of the Class B)?
Change History (3)
comment:1 by , 20 years ago
Owner: | changed from | to
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comment:2 by , 20 years ago
Status: | new → assigned |
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comment:3 by , 20 years ago
Resolution: | → fixed |
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Status: | assigned → closed |